The tyes of mistakes are almost the same in both students.
William tends to make the same mistakes all over his writing. The main ones are sentences length, wrong use of words and word order. It is weird to analyze others’ mistakes because I used to have them a not so long time ago.
The wrong use of words could be because of the lack of vocabulary. The length problem occurs because in Spanish we have a tendency to write more than we need.
The wrong use of words could be because of the lack of vocabulary. The length problem occurs because in Spanish we have a tendency to write more than we need.
Maria Jose’s mistakes are mainly word order and no needed words in her writing. However, she does it very well with sentences length. She also needs more vocabulary and pay more attention to the use of preposition and the multiple meanings that words can have.
