Sunday, November 16, 2008

Last corrections

Maria José:

My favourite piece of technology

I use technology in my life, mainly for work(t) and entertainment. For home labors it’s important because it’s easier and faster.

Computers are the most used piece(sp) of technology in the word(sp) (sm)myself included. This is mainly because this piece of technology is used for communications in e-mails, chat, messenger software (voice and writing), many special software’s (nn)that help people’s work,(x) as source of information and video games.

I have used computers for many years, I can’t remember for how long. My life would be very difficult without the computer, work and communications need computers on this(f) times. Without my computer I would be lost in the cyber world.

But my favourite piece of technology is much simpler. I enjoy music very much, for this reason pen drives, mp3s and iPods are for me the best choice. I remember when(sm) having a portable CD player was really the best, but you couldn’t move them too much or the tracks would skip. Now portable music players are smaller and have several times(wws) the capacity of old CD players and the MP3 format allows to store hundreds of songs on a small and very portable device.

I had a very small pendrive that dind’t(t) play music, but a couple of months ago I got a new pendrive with a lot of capacity and that plays music files. I love it, I can listen to my favortite songs while I go to University and I also use it to store my assignments and documents. Without it, it would be harder to transfer my documents form(ww) one computer to another, and I wouldn’t be able to listen to all the song I like while I’m not at home.

William:

My possible future.

Well I always have the same problem when somebody ask me this type of questions(p) but I always answer different(p) for this reason in my opinion I think that in 5 years later I will be Living(c-l) in another country, and maybe studying another career or studying a post grade(ww) but I believe that I could be working for a public sector company or for an university, I am not sure right now.
Ideal future.
I do not have a ideal future but the only thing that I can say is that in the future I would like to be happy and I can not define what kind of life will bring me happier sometimes I think that living in the countryside far away from civilization living like a hunter, fishing, cutting firewood, in short living a simple life but this is only an aspiration because I know that this type of life can not be possible in these days, I believe.

Wednesday, November 5, 2008

Uch posts

María José:

I am a cinema fan. A good film to me is “Underground” from Emir Kusturica. I saw this film for first time mmmh... four years ago, with a friend, in(ww) the Cine Normandie, this place is a tradicional art cinema in downtown santiago.

I remembered this day, because I ate a bad brownie, it was decomposed. And the day was hot. I have(t) been in the cinema for almost 3 hours, it was very nice.

It is a very complete and diverse film. It’s hard to catalogue it,(p) because it’s a political movie,(x) with drama, comedy, action, musical and surrealism(sp). It provides a mix of emotions for the spectator.

Buuf ... Any attempt to do a synopsis is complicated enough(wo). The arguments, the music, and the magnificent conjunction of the historical facts (the wars) and the story itself. All that makes the film a masterpiece and very a(wo) entertaining experience(sp).

Is(sm) the metaforic history of Yugoslavia. The trama is about Blaky, a married man, he has a romance with a frivolous actress whos(sp) name is Natalija. But Blaky has a friend, Marko, but he also is in love of Natalija and they use the ward, together they cheat it, whith(sp) a group of underground(sp) people. And they take advantage, making them work, forming a clandestine weapons industry(sp).

Favorite Website

The web site I cannot live without is letras.terra.com.br Here you can find any lyric you could be looking for. This is a Brazilian website that I found three years ago when I was looking for an Aretha song (sm)“Chain of fools”. After I knew (sm) it, I just fall(t) in love with the page and (sm)it is(ww)(sm) my main source of lyrics since then(wo).In this page you can find lyrics of almost every type of music: anime, Celtic, soul, blues, rock & roll, regeton(sp), gospel, and soundtracks, everything you want. How would I not love this page?? The only problem is that sometimes there is only the Brazilian version available…I try to visit this website every time I can because it helps me to update my personal lyrics notebook. Unfortunately as I do not have internet at home anymore, it is difficult to have free time during the week to visit it.

Original:

The web site I cannot live without is letras.terra.com.br Here you can find any lyric you could be looking for. This is a Brazilian website that I found three years ago when I was looking for an Aretha’s song “Chain of fools”. After I knew it, I just fall in love with the page and it is my main source of lyrics since then.In this page you can find lyrics of almost every type of music: anime, Celtic, soul, blues, rock & roll, regeton, gospel, and soundtracks, everything you want. How would I not love this page?? The only problem is that sometimes there is only the Brazilian version available…I try to visit this website every time I can because it helps me to update my personal lyrics notebook. Unfortunately as I do not have internet at home anymore, it is difficult to have free time during the week to visit it.

The Austrian Monster(correction)


News(sm) that caught my attention was the case of the Austrian girl that has been kidnapped and raped by his father for the last 24 years!!! As (sm) result of this (f) continues violation (f) she had seven children of(ww) his father. I just cannot conceive the idea of a father doing those horrible things to his (sm)daughter, he is a sick man,(p) he deserves the worst of the punishments(sm).


Original:

News that caught all my attention was the case of the Austrian girl that has been kidnapped and raped by his father for 24 years!!! As result of this continues violation she had seven children of his father. I just cannot conceive the idea of a father doing those horrible things to his daughter, he is a sick man, he deserves the worst of the punishments.