Corrections II

William:

In my opinion a great, (p) and interesting film is AI (artificial intelligence) directed by the experimented (ww) Stanley Kubrick and the Midas king of Hollywood Steven Spielberg (p) this movie is about a new type of android that has the ability of (ww) love. This story is set in a near future, (p) where the (nn) global warming has led to ecological disasters all over the world, (p) and a drastic reduction of the (nn) human population (p) for this reason the Cybertronics company create (f) droids with different characteristics like prostitute droids or droids with the boy appearance (p)in this context a family lost his first and unique son and try to replace him with a droid (p) that (ww)’s the beginning of the story.

I remember(t) that I saw this film alone last year(p) and(x) when I saw this film (nn) (sm) I was surprised because this film is about science fiction but the argument is very realistic(p) because(nn) I think in some decades this could be real and maybe machines shall(ww) replace us.

Carry on with the story the droid kid called David conquest the heart of Monica; David’s adopted (f) mother (p) he has a good life with another droid with the appearance of a teddy bear called Teddy(p) after a short time the real son of the family recover(f) his health and he become(ww) jealous about David and a very sad story continues(ww) … (sm)better see it.

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Maria Jose:
I and the future (wo)

In the future… I would like to be working in my profession whit(sp) environmental thematic(ww). Always I liked (wo) (sm vt)the PDI (Policía de Investigaciones), maybe I will to(x) work in this institution.I would like to publish paper(f) with my investigations,(p nn) to reach with the community in urbanism and environment.

Personally… I would like to live alone, (p) or may be with some female friend, (p)in the city, but a(x) (sm) don’t liked the city life, (p) because is very uncomfortable for the(nn) health,(p) in many years in the future I will live in the periphery zone, (p) with a good system transportation(wo) to(ww) the city.

And(ww) to star an athletic life, it´s important for(nn) to be in form(ww),(p) I begun to practice sports, I am trying, but is very hard for my, I am lazy.

I would like to be different things or to return(ww) to do activities that I have left (ww) (sm). I am keen to return (sm)

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